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A Fun Toy For Us But Bad For The Earth
Contributed by: Jensina Bailly on 8/18/2009

Littlist pets are a popular toy, but the Earth does not like them. This week, I got to look at a small purple and white panda, and her trycycle. It is a cute toy, but terrible for the Earth. A lot of kids like them, because they are fun to play with, and fit in the palm of your hand.
When I first got the toy, I noticed all of the packaging. I counted nine rubber bands, five for the tricycle and four for the panda. That is a lot. Then I counted three large peices of cardboard and three peices of tape. The one thing that made me most mad was that there were twelve peices of plastic. And it was the kind that you can't recycle!
After that, I talked to a girl who has lots of littleist pets. She says, " They are handy toys, and fun to play with, but they are bad for the Earth. If you throw one away, they never biodegrade! " When she told me that they never biodegrade, well I got pretty mad. Really littleist pets would be so much better if there was not so much packaging. Maybe they could userecycled cardboard insted of new. Maybe they could use less plastic! But they are good toys. My sister sure likes them!



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Submitted By: Isabelle M
posted on 11/15/2009 @ 7:24:29 AM
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You've expressed your opinion well. But now, try going back to the editing mode and adding in some information to support all the ideas. You're on the right track, though ; keep it up.
Submitted By: Emma Selner
posted on 8/24/2009 @ 8:43:58 PM
Rated Story
good story veyr informative but was still fun to read!
Submitted By: Kelsey Campbell
posted on 8/22/2009 @ 12:12:48 AM
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i love littlest pet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Submitted By: Tiara Stephan
posted on 8/21/2009 @ 3:22:43 PM
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Littlest Pet Shops really are wasteful. Do try to check your spelling though.
Submitted By: Justin Ford
posted on 8/18/2009 @ 4:36:56 PM
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I agree with them. Especially make sure to spell check.
Submitted By: Lauren McCulley
posted on 8/18/2009 @ 2:49:26 PM
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Next time, do a more thorough spell check. Also, like Bailey said, get more information, and try to use other punctuation besides exclamation points.
Submitted By: Bailey Cross
posted on 8/18/2009 @ 12:05:23 PM
Rated Story
Good job, but there are a few things you might want to try next time. Try not to use as many exclamation points and collect some more facts instead of just your opinion. :)
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Jensina Bailly

Denver , CO

Jensina Bailly has posted 3 stories and 6 comments since joining on 7/16/2009. Jensina Bailly 's average story rating is 2.88.
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