Have you taken a face-off?
"Face Off" by Jake Maddox will draw you in right away. "Face Off" is probably for fourth grade and under. "Face Off" has no bad words. "Face Off" by Jake Maddox tells about a kid named Kyle who wants to be a phenomenal hockey player just like his brother. To do that his team can't get distracted by another players injury.
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I did well on organizing my piece but i can work on adding more details.
Good job but work on your word choise
Hi Josh, You do realize that this isn't a complete book review? You try to grab the reader in your lead but you're not giving enough details in your sentences. You started the summary using the NVBP organization then did not give any details (BMMME) to support that you read the book. The third paragraph describing a specific part of the story is missing and so is the conclusion. Please try again. I noticed that you haven't commented on any of your classmates' writing. You should read their work because there are some great models for you to ponder when you write your next book review. I'd love to see that beautiful smile posted in a picture on your web page too.
Josh is this book for girls or boys! nice review.
Josh,You had a great B but you don't have an M M M E. You can maybe work on getting the M M M E in the story.Thanks,Kalina