You think your granny is cranky? Check out Stan's! Don't let her fingers get even close to your ear! And Geri? Don't get close to her! Everything else? Phew! You're in for a ride!
I am freewriting a book and I've completed the first chapter, I know there are hundreds of thousands of reviews on this website, so I figured it wouldn't hurt to get some feedback on this. So, could you tell me what you think? (Sorry if there are any mistakes. I looked through it and put some effort into editing mistakes)