White House Dog!

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Allyson Malecha writes, As many have heard…

As many have heard, President Obama promised his daughters Malia and Sasha a new puppy coming with them to the White House. I heard that one of the daughters has an allergy, so they need a “hypoallergenic” dog, like a poodle or goldendoodle. I also heard that they were looking at purebred dogs. Personally, I love shelter dogs and mutts are fine with me, but after all, he is the president. I guess we will wait and see!

3 COMMENTS

  1. I can’t wait to hear abou…
    I can’t wait to hear about the new dog – however, I think this story seems more like a blog entry.

  2. Good job, but a few tips.
    Good job, but a few tips… First, try not to start your sentences with “I heard”. Instead, just jump in to the sentence or say “I looked around and found out”. Also, try moving the story or adding it to a blog entry. It’s a little too short to be a full story. Otherwise great job! You show a little personal experience, which is a good school. Wow!

  3. Thanks Guys!
    Thanks Guys! Yeah, my blog is about food, so I can’t throw a story about a dog in, otherwise I would have…

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