My reply to negativity.

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Jordan Walker-Cardos writes, I got a lot of negative feedback on my Essay for Veterans and war.

I got a lot of negative feedback on my Essay for Veterans and war. I understand that we all have different views on a controversial subject, but i have a very strong opinion. Caroline Hoard said, “I strongly disagree. Yes, people should respect the soldeirs who risked/lost their life for war, but it depends on what the soldiers are fighting for. Most of the people that want the soldiers out of the war is because we are losing their lives very quickly. There is always a time to stop fighting, to protect the lives of soldiers that could still be lived.”I will go through this in my opinion. I don’t think that it matters what the soldiers are fighting for as long as they are fighting for America. Yes, there is a time to stop fighting, but these soldiers volunteered. Its not like They are being drafted. When they went into the war, they knew they might have to give their lives. Let me give you an example,If we never fight back, or just quit now, you might not be able to write to me on this website. In fact none of us might not even be able to have our own views. Its called freedom of speech and if we didn’t fight for that right, imagine what our “Land of the Free” might be like.(Just another point here, if we didn’t have volunteer soldiers, we would have to go through a draft. No matter how much you guys protest.) Fighting for your country is fighting for your country BOTTOM LINE.

3 COMMENTS

  1. I see your point of view…
    I see your point of view, but I disagree. That’s okay, though. It shows us that we all have different opinions. Keep writing… you’re very persuasive. Great organization.

  2. I’m rather neutral on thi…
    I’m rather neutral on this topic; however, in critiquing your writing style, I would suggest that this article would be better as a blog, as it discusses your personal opinion. Furthermore, in your second-to-last sentance, you wrote, “No matter how much you guys protest”. Now, doesn’t that seem slightly degrading? It stereotypes your readers. Keep writing, you’re quite persuasive. You should join a debate team (if you haven’t already). Good Job :]

  3. I like that you are willi…
    I like that you are willing to stand up for what you beleive in. Every writer needs that quality in them! You are a great pursuasive writer. Keep writing persuasive stories! Good Job.

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