The Summer that could have been Cooler

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Kelsey Campbell writes, this summer it was not what i was hoping for and i get sat at home all day doing nothing…

this summer it was not what i was hoping for and i get sat at home all day doing nothing, and i just played with my roud friend Madlyn. i did go swimming, but not a lot. school is next week, and I do wont to go. I am looking forded to homework!! Am I crazy!! Yes, i am. i am just a kid, and i know about the stock market, People losing jobs, and alot more, this makes me wonder why kids my age should not have all this info, but i do and does that me you cant, relaxe have a good school year! I have alot of good and bad school homework: Bad- ALL- Good- NONE. have a good year!!

4 COMMENTS

  1. Kelsey- you have an inter…
    Kelsey- you have an interesting topic to be writing about, but I think you need to do spell-check and try to fix up the grammar a bit because it’s a little hard to follow. Keep writing :)PS. I LOVE the drawn pictures! Did you draw those on your computer, or did you find them somewhere? They look great!

  2. There were a lot of gramm…
    There were a lot of grammar and speelling errors..so next time try a more thorough spell check.

  3. Also…
    Also, you kind of mixed the economy with your summer, next time, try separating that into two stories, with a lottle more information on each subject!

  4. You did a good job…
    You did a good job, just proof read first. Dont worry, i have to work on it too.

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