SPLASH!!!

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Erin Moriarty writes, CRASH!!! i had fallen off my bike for the 1,005th time (kidding).

CRASH!!! i had fallen off my bike for the 1,005th time (kidding). “Come on, Erin. Lets practice at the dog park.” That was my dad. He had been trying all afternoon to teach me how to ride a bike. the trouble was, that about every other fall, I began to think that the park was out to get me, and we had to change location. Of course, all of the dogs at the dog park created a joyful atmosphere, and finally, I succeded. Growing slightly over-confident, I decided to circle the large pon in the middle of the park. I leaned . . . and leaned . . . and leaned . . . and-SPLASH!!! Ifell in, and was immediatly soaked through. dad ran over to congradulate me and to remind me that ‘If you’re not failing, you’re not trying hard enough.’

2 COMMENTS

  1. okay…
    okay, try adding a little more detail next time, and you don’t have to day kidding after something….readers should be able to tell that it is an hyperbole. great idea…just try to expand a little more on it! 😉

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